文书点评：放射诊断学（Diagnostic Radiology）申请文书

As I peered into the cavernous incision in the dead man's chest, I marveled at the intricate network of arteries and veins connected to his silent heart. More than sparking my interest, however, this experience engraved the patterns of organs, nerves, muscles, and bones in my mind. Gross anatomy provided one of the most memorable experiences of my first year in medical school, and dissecting a human body made me keenly aware of the vastly complex nature of my chosen profession. Thoroughly studying the strategies of the body, followed by their revelation in the gross anatomy lab, permanently cemented the knowledge of physiology in my memory. Subsequently, I employed visualization to master many different subjects, realizing that I am a visual learner and prefer to think in three dimensions.

I progressed through human physiology and pathology, and each organ system aroused my curiosity in a different way. The body is beautifully constructed, and every element efficiently fulfills its indispensable role. By the end of my second year, I was determined to pursue a field that enabled me to interact with science on a broad basis. I commenced my clinical rotations excited to discover my niche within medicine and decipher my interests and strengths. I appreciated my diverse rotations, and I learned from the unique character of each experience.

Through exposure to an endless variety of patients, I solidified my understanding of physician-patient relationships and came to recognize the value of teamwork in health care. I found immense fulfillment in observing firsthand the treatments that various medical teams offered to patients. What particularly intrigued me among the multiple layers of patient care, however, was the power of diagnosis. I profoundly enjoyed the mental challenge of piecing together fragments of history, physical exams, labs, and imaging studies to decipher the cause of an illness.

Progressing through my clinical rotations, I became increasingly conscious of the central role of radiological studies in making a diagnosis. I eagerly anticipated my daily trip to the reading room, accompanied my patients to radiology whenever possible, and thoroughly discussed the studies with the supervising physician. To investigate the field and acquaint myself with new developments, I subscribed to the Radiological Society of North America and the journals of Radiology and Radio Graphics. Impressed by the power, capabilities, and utility of X-ray, Ultrasound, CT, and MRI studies in diagnostics, I also appreciate the vast amount of knowledge required to become a proficient radiologist.

I learned about the applied aspects of biomedical science by observing the role of clinical work in alleviating illness and restoring confidence to patients, but I also recognized that modern medicine is still lacking. To familiarize myself with the techniques used to advance medical knowledge, I began working in the human islet program of a local diabetes research laboratory. This job has proved tremendously rewarding, and I have received nothing but warmth, understanding, and an intense urge to teach from my mentors. Research has deepened my understanding of disease and demonstrated the importance of precision and teamwork. My commitment to research has earned me co-authorship of eight published papers, and I now see clinical medicine and research as inseparable. I plan to integrate my interests in the future, applying insights gained from both aspects of medicine to heal and help.

My decision to pursue a specialty in diagnostic radiology is the culmination of long analysis of my medical skills and personality. My dedication to precision and teamwork, along with my interest in dealing with the broad spectrum of human illness through the unique perspective of imaging modalities, will make me a superb radiologist. By piecing together my interests and strengths -- much like arriving at a diagnosis -- I have selected the field where I will not merely succeed but excel. Diagnostic radiology is my passion, and I will dedicate all of my effort and insights to it, achieving personal and professional satisfaction.

点评：

整篇文章作者很细致的对于自己每一个阶段的提升做了描述，使得评审们可以很直接详细的了解到申请者的软件背景，包括专业兴趣的产生，专业学习的点滴过程，专业提升的程度等诸多方面进行了很细致的陈述。这样的一篇文章大体上看是很有针对性并且富有目的性的，并不是所有篇幅长的文章都使得评审厌烦，只要语言真诚，简介，直接都会使阅读的人产生兴趣，耐心的看完并给与客观的评价。

尤其，对自己角色转变的感受可以给出真实的体会，让评审们对其人格品德有了很客观的了解。行医救人，一个医生的职业道德很重要，申请者应当很重视这部分的体现，并不需要一味的吹嘘，夸张，而需要最真实的体现。

中间部分作者向读者们表现出了其很强的专业度，并且对于自己不同阶段的提升心得有所体现，这样便于评审们对其软件经历进行了解，评估。

末尾部分对于自己的专业发展目标进行了说明，典型的励志性表达，虽然过于形式化，但是不乏个人针对性。

这样有逻辑，有针对性的文书，对于申请的帮助将会是直接，关键的。

译文：

当我从死者胸口的切口凹陷处向里面窥望的时候，那些错综复杂动脉和静脉连着死者那颗已经停止跳动的心脏，我为此而感到惊叹。这次经历除了激起了我的兴趣之外，更重要的是将器官、肌肉、神经、骨头的形状深深的刻在了我的脑海当中。在医学院第一年的解剖课留给了我最难忘的一段经历，解剖人体让我急切地想了解到我所选择的职业到底有多么的深邃与复杂。彻底的学习了人体解剖学，然后在解剖室里的演示，不断的使我记忆中的生物知识得到巩固。接着，我采用了形象化的方法来掌握我所学到的知识，并发现我是一个靠视觉学习的人，更习惯从三个方面来思考问题。

我先后学习了人类生理学和病理学每一个人体器官都从不同的层面激起我的好奇心。人体结构是美丽的，每个部分都各自有效的扮演着自己的角色。第二年的学习结束之后，我决定再尝试一个能够让我在更广的层面的接触科学的领域。我开始着手一边享受医学给我带来的兴奋一边寻找我自己的兴趣和强项所在。我感激这两个角色的变换，每一种都给我带来不小得收获。

通过诊断无数不同的病人之后，我更加明白了医生与病人之间的关系，并开始认识到在看护病人时，所需要的团队精神。当我将我们医学团队的第一手诊断资料交给客户的时候我感到无比的满足感。然而，在众多的层面中，最能引起我好奇心的是诊断书的力量。我非常享受拼凑历史片段、生理测试、实验室、学习通过想象来破解病因等等带给我的挑战。

在我临床交替的过程中，我渐渐注意到了放射学在诊断过程中的中心作用。我急切盼望着在阅览室里呆上一天，尽可能的陪我的病人做X广，区和教授交流学习心得。为了继续在领域里的研究并让自身有新的发展，我在北美放射协会和放射与无线电坐标的请愿书上签了字。学习诊断学时，我为X光的能量，实效、超声波、CT、MRI感到佩服，同时也感慨要成为一个放射学专家要拥有的巨大知识储备。

在考察临床工作在减轻病痛和加速恢复过程中的作用时，我学到了一些生物医学应用方面的知识，但同时，我也看到了许多现代医学的不足之处。为了让自己通过技术的应用能加强我的医学知识，我开始在当地一个糖尿病研究小组的一个人类小岛项目工作。这份工作让我受益不少，整个工作过程中我收获到了温暖、理解和良师益友们给我的知识。研究加深了我对疾病的理解也证明准确性和团队合作的重要性。我参加研究的承诺融为了八份发表了的论文的作者之一，现在我将临床医学和研究都作为不可分割的部分。基于我今后兴趣的发展，我决定将我学到的医学两个方面在治疗和协助中的作用结合起来。

今后在诊断放射学方面发展的决定，是在仔细分析我的专业技能和性格之后才做出的。我在精确度、团队合作方面做出的贡献，以及我在对疾病更宽领域探索的兴趣，都将促使我成为一个出色的放射线研究者。就想做诊断一样，我运用我的兴趣和力量对该领域做一个调查，在这个领域里，我不仅要做到成功，还要达到杰出。诊断放射学是我激情所在，我将会把握所有的努力与洞察力倾注到这里，以满足个人以及职业的发展要求。