全自费去美国一很小的大学读MBA 1

范例1．1 提要

申请者概况

政法大学毕业，已经工作四五年，全自费去美国一个非常小的大学读MBA

拒签理由

哥哥在美国读书，有移民倾向自费花很多钱去读MBA，有移民倾向

申诉重点

哥哥在美国没有违反移民法，更不能因为哥哥的成功就剥夺妹妹去美国的机会自费去美国读MBA，正是为了回国成功，因为MBA在美国不好找工作己已经很成功很有钱，但为了更好的前途需要提高自己，接受一个美国的MBA学位

范例1．2 原文

Dear Visa Officer :

My application for a student visa was reiected on June 8 , 1996. The visa officer gave me the following reasons for her refusal ;

l. My brother is a Ph. D. student currently studying in the United States.

2. I would not return to China after I spend more than twenty thousand dollars for my MBA degree.

Although the above reasons could be true to some other applicants, they are not a reasonable judgment to my particular case. Therefore the refusal to my visa is not fair. I request that you reconsider my application on the ground of following two reasons :

1. It is true that my brother is studying at the Department of Mechanlcal Engineering of Florida State University. I have no argument with that fact. However ,he is ]ust In the middle of the process to comp!ete his graduate program toward a Ph. D. Degree. He never sought to work in or immigrate to the United States. The first reason of rejection is a misjudgment not only to my own intention ,but also a groundless guess to my brother's future plan.

Is there an American law stipulating that if brother studies in US then sister will not be aLlowed to attend an Anlerican school? I donrt think so. I would understand the visa officer's point of view if my brother did anything violating his obligation as a visa student. But he never did. I can not accept the fact that I am refused the opportunity to study in the US just because my brother is also studying in the same country. My brotherrs success shouidn't be the reason for my failure.

2. Am I going to come back to China after I spend more than twenty thousand dollars for an American MBA degree ? Sure I will! I have four convlncing reasons to prove this point :

A. As a legal professional , I made more than twenty thousand US dollars for last year and for this year ,I will certainly make more.

B. My husband is a senior manager in a Beiiing real estate company. Healso makes decent money. Twenty thousand US dollars is not .a big .deal to us considering my family income.

C. Because of the fact that I am already making an excellent income with a very promising legal career in china, I win definitely come back after I receive my MBA in America. I would be shooting mysell if I do not return when I am gold-plated bv your country,s MBA title.

D. Everybody knows that the job future in the United States for MBAs is not bright. If I do intend to immigrate to America ,why would I choose to spend "more than twenty thousand dollars" on a degree that will guarantee my unemployment after my graduation in your country?

Although not yet a millionaire , I am but a very well established legal professional in a rapidly developing country that constantly chaUenges me to expand my scope in education and inreal ability. My future is great in China,but will be much greater if you grant me a visa for me to finish mv cherished MBA degree in the United States.

I deeply appreciate your favorable review to my case.

Sincerely ,